The Watching Eye - Patricia Elliott

Only 4% in and I'm already starting to get disappointed. So far we have


1) Very choppy writing

2) A lead male with creepy stalker thoughts (which means Maud will probably be heads over heels in love with him after their first real conversation)

3) Run on sentences galore. Seriously, there is no reason one sentence should have 7 commas

4) Weird formatting. There are spaces in the *middle* of quite a few  paragraphs (Ok, this one maybe my ignorance and nothing wrong with the actual book. This is the first book I've received from Netgalley. This may be normal since it's for promotion use. I will find out soon enough)